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John sat on the couch, looking as though bothered at something. Something not being the case, he was ferrous. He had always tried to get Sherlock to see what he meant. Every "brilliant" he muttered, every "bloody, that's fantastic" he whispered in his breath, every gaze he shot him; they all meant something more then just a job-well-done.

Sherlock always seemed like a hard person to reach, going off on his own path, doing things his way, being the lazy ass he was. But John never would have guessed that Sherlock could be so... -blind-! The great Sherlock freaking Holmes, blind.

Blind to feelings, adornment, caring and sometimes even loving actions. John sometimes made it so painfully obvious that he was sure Sherlock was going to blow up and yell at him any moment now.

"John..?" John snapped his attention to the tall figure towering over him on his perch on the couch.

"Y-yes?" John shook his head back to Sherlock.

"Can I play something for you? I need opinions." Sherlock said, retreating to his violin on the other side of the room, displaying it to John.

"Of course!" John sat up a little more against the sofa. Sherlock came back to where the coffee table was, staying across from John. He placed the violin under his chin and positioned the bow.

Softly, he started the melody. A paced tempo, mysterious, upbeat notes. John closed his eyes, picturing a chase through a Japanese garden, the one you see in the movies with the fluttering pink pedals. It was a strangely relaxing tune.

It changed, the capture, a upbeat happy tune, slightly higher then the mysterious tune. He heard some of the mysterious noted thrown in there... Suspense.

John opened his eyes as Sherlock played through the capture. Sherlock caught them with his, holding them captive. His blue/gray eyes were coated in lust. Something was lingering there, in his eyes. Something John has never seen before in his friend's mysterious eyes. Something John couldn't pin-point.

The melody slowed a little, turning darker. Sherlock's eyes flashed as the tune did. John found himself standing. He glided around the coffee table and stood inches in front of Sherlock.

The tune changed again. Happy notes danced from the strings. It was upbeat and somehow romantic. A tune you would hear as background to candles and a dinner.

John got closer to Sherlock, carefully landing his lips on his. The tune came to an end (the real end or the loss-of-concentration-from-the-kiss end, John didn't know) and the instrument fell to the ground, giving Sherlock free hands to take John's waist gently.

John pulled back to look in those blue/gray eyes. Lust, shock, wanting, loving. All this coated Sherlock's normally-mysterious beautiful eyes.

"Comments?" Sherlock whispered slowly, sounding (for once) at a struggle for words.

"Kiss me." John whispered back, almost in a breath.
Just some fluff I wrote for you guys before I left! :D

ROAD TRIP BITCHES :D

Anyway, I wrote this at 2 in the morning... so I'm sorry if there's any sort of mis-spellings... I read it threw again and actually found Sherlock was grabbing his own hips the first time... so ya, things like that, I'm sorry for...

Part 9, 10, and 11 will be out Monday, or Tuesday with part 12 (yes, there will be that many parts... I counted...)

So once I'm done with the series, any requests? :dance:

I can't believe it's over half way over, you guys are so great ^^;

See you in 3 days :D
♥ ~Blake Moriarty
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NerdGirl445 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Writer
I absolutely loved it but as a long time violist myself I cringed at the dropping of the violin. 
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
hahah sorry ^^; I promise, it's completely fine ^^;
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10DrWatson Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Student Writer
This is FANTASTICNESS!!!!
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww thank u so much ^^;
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10DrWatson Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome ^.^
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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ERbear26 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconitssofluffyplz:
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
took me a minute to figure out what that was 0-0
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ERbear26 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it's so fluffy!
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaht ahnms
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Guifloyd Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012
That was very sweet

smooth as a chocolate liqueur

Firm on the outside, soft and wet on the inside

I loved it.

I await your return.

The series will be over 12 chapters? 20?
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Quiet a couple... 0-0 I have no idea how many chapters excatly, I just know it's more then 12
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remanth Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awww, this is cute. But Sherlock dropping his violin? I don't really see that happening. Maybe placing it on an armchair. And I really liked the music, it was sweet.
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I didn't know... I was just like "DROP IT BITCH! KISS YOUR JOHN!" soooo thats what he did ^^;
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remanth Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehe, its ok :) As long as it wasn't broken. And the kissing John bit did kinda make up for it :)
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I doubt it was broken.. I mean, I dropped my guitar from that hight and nothing happened to it... and I'm glad the kissing John bit made up for it.

I was so mad tho. I wrote it all up on my Ipod, at like, 1:30 in the morning. I read it through, checked all the errors, then went to save it... MY IPOD FREAKING SHUT THE APP ON ME thus... deleteing my work :( I was so much better then first time...

This was my second writing of it, at 2 in the freaking morning... my Ipod hates me I guess :(
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remanth Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awww, I'm sorry. That's why I do all my work on my computer. Although, I did accidentally close a tab on my Precious Treasure chapter in my Johnlock and had to rewrite a good quarter of it. I was ticked off hehe.
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I had to bite my pillow to keep from cursing... at night... middle of it... with parents asleep... sooo ya... but I never write on a "computer" I write on my Ipad, no, not the same thing... 0-0
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Goosie-Boosie Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwwwwwww <333333 This was the most adorable thing ever. Very in character, too! Nice work!
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awwwwww thank you so much :)
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Goosie-Boosie Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
x333 No prob!
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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theCatrina89 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Student General Artist
I loved it.
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :D
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theCatrina89 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student General Artist
you're very welcome.
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thedefiantwierdo Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012
i was going to call him the virgin womaniser, but that would imply that john was a woman and hes not so i'm going to just show you this face and hope it sums things up:
:giggle:
and this one:
:music:
and this one coz its awesome:
:dizzy:

erm yeah, i'll shut up now, but it was really good! :thumbsup:
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
wow... -o- haha you having mixed emotions there?! :D hes a maniser ^^; lol poor John -s- He loves it tho <3 ♥
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thedefiantwierdo Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012
of course he loves it, wht man could withstand SHERLOCK HOLMES THE MIGHTY MANISER!!! lol
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
um... let me think NO ONE!
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thedefiantwierdo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
lol
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Tigzzz Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Aww :aww:
Tsk, dropping his violin? That would make it go terribly out of tune! I hope he didn't break it ;p
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
do you really think he cares when John is kissing him? ;)
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Tigzzz Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I suppose not... He might mind afterwards, though. Violins are expensive!
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's Sherlock, I don't think he's the one who worries about expenses :/ Poor John lol
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Tigzzz Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
He he he :D I guess he doesn't!!
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hahah he worries about nothing except not being booooored
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Tigzzz Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Ah, but without his violin, what can he do to stop being bored?
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
...He -does- have John ;)
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Anissa4400 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012
he maybe care... after that :P
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So true...
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