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John traced his thumb against Sherlock's lively pink lip, looking deep into the detective's blue/gray, mysterious eyes. Oh, how badly he wanted to kiss this man, he didn't even know! His heart started pounding, hard, against his chest, fighting to get out.

"I don't see any damage, Sherlock..." John muttered, his thumb still skimming that delicate lip.

"Keep looking." Sherlock urged. "I know there must be something wrong with it! It hurts..."

Sometimes Sherlock made this face. It reminded John so much of a helpless little kid, and it was adorable. John's heart stopped as Sherlock's eyes looked so helplessly into his own, and he gasped lightly for breath. He panted, in a way, wanting to bring Sherlock closer.

John moved closer to Sherlock's face, examining the lip for tiny cuts of any kind. Of course, there were none that he could see... but he couldn't look away from that pair of adorable lips. He wanted to claim them as his own with his. 

"Sherlock..."

"Keep looking, John." Sherlock whispered the words, so gently, so beautifully. 

John's breath caught and his heart jumped to his throat. His stomach did a sort of flip from the words alone, becoming like a knot. How did Sherlock do this to him? He so much as whispered his name and John melted.

"Sherlock... Can I kiss you?" The words slipped out of John's lips before he could stop them.

There were seconds of pure, utter silence that seemed to drag on for hours. John sat there, looking at Sherlock's misty eyes, his thumb on Sherlock's bottom lip. 

"Of course, doctor." Sherlock whispered in that beautifully deep voice that made John weak at the knees.

Slowly, gently, John leaned forward and caught Sherlock's lips with his. His hand moved to Sherlock's cheek and he leaned on the arm chair that Sherlock was sitting in. Sherlock sat there, kissing John back slowly, beautifully, carefully. Sherlock was a little sloppy, attempting to follow John's lead, never having done this before, but John thought it perfect. At last, an area where John was the genius and Sherlock the follower. 

John backed off and looked Sherlock in the eyes, their faces very close to each other's. 

"Please... John... Keep looking..." Sherlock muttered, leaning in and catching John's lips again.
I'm sooooo sorry :noes: Today went by too fast and I got too busy... Work, school, and other shit... I litterally had NO TIME to write ANYTHING!

So, I had to tap into my "stash" of stories I randomly wrote um... last night... 0-0

I saw this peice of art (I wish i remembered who in the world did it...) labled "Can I Kiss You, Sherlock?" and I was like, "That would be such a cute first kiss story" soooo here it is ^^;

See, post art, it helps ^^;

I hope if you reconize or did this art work you would tell me, so I can add a link to it for inspiring this story... I feel bad for not faving the story for this... I'm hating myself for not... :noes: But to whoever did that art work: GREAT JOB AND PLEASE COMMENT TO TELL ME IF IT WAS YOU WITH A LINK TO IT! I wanna give you credit.... :noes:

Anywho... enjoy <3

<3~Blake Moriarty

I FOUND IT! :D it's by :iconafwruh: ^^; there we go ^^;

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jessy1213 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014
Drool revamp 
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tamii131313 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
Sure sherlock. Ur lip hurts. Iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii see what u did there. *wink* *wink* *nudge* *nudge*
Aha sorry. But this was adorable! 
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IamSHERlocked22-1B Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014
Aww
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thanks
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boylov Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014
O_O that was amazing!...*stares and drools* Big Fool Emoji-05 (Pervy Nosebleed) [V2] 
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :) :hug:
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:iconboylov:
boylov Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
You're welcome!! This was so cute! I loved it!
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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:iconboylov:
boylov Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
You're welcome! ^o^ I get all giggly when I read it!
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aKlainer Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Interface Designer
Wow. I love this.
Johnlock is on! <3
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :)

Make sure to check out the rest of my gallery with more Johnlock and Mystrade stories and watch me for a new story every Monday :)
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Frantasicnoodles Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That is fantastic!
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :)

I hope you enjoy the rest of the gallery as well and watch me for more updates on Sherlock stories :)
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Frantasicnoodles Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem! & will do(: I'm currently working on a fanfic, check it out?(: tell me what you think! I need more opinions (:
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'll check it out when I have some free time on my hands :)
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CountingRainDrops Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh my gosh this is adorable!
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh, thank you so much ^^; :tighthug:
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Iamjohnlocked8646 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Cute
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thx :)
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medzkitty Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Oh my goodness! XD Too cute~!
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :)
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swirlingdreams Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012
Beautiful idea, I liked the continuity of it, the singular idea of "Keep looking, John." I really liked that. Well done. :)
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much :) That means a lot :)
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missarpeggio Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is adorable! I love it :D Seems exactly like the sort of thing Sherlock would do!
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awwww, thank you so much ^^; :hug:
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missarpeggio Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome!! :heart:
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Afwruh Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That was pure cuteness!!

I love the idea that he's looking for some "damage" on Sherlock's lips. Because they're so close and they've never kiss each other and is so irresistible and asdasdasdasd.

Thank you so much for made this inspired in my drawing! thank you! :)
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm overly joyed that you liked it ^^; :clap:

Thank you so much for doing such an amazing job on the art work! I hope maybe our paths will cross again for insperation! :hug:
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Afwruh Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really hope so too! :D
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha I'll keep my eye out then ;)
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Guifloyd Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
I just had a seizure!


Brilliant!

^. ~
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awww thank you so much :D :boogie:
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Tigzzz Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:faint:
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*trys to catch* d'oh I missed!
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Tigzzz Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Hmph ;p
I love it!! :faint: <Oops
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
im glad!
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Tigzzz Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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Iwantacuppa Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
THIS.IS.SOOOO.ADORABLE!!!!!!!
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
awwww thank you ♥♥♥
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Johannka Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Student Photographer
Ohhh, Love it! <3
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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Aniphine Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Professional Writer
This is absolutely adorable! I love how tender and purely sweet you make John's perspective. Great story! :D
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much ^^;
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storychanter Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think you just broke me dfghjkouytfrdcvbjiyt
<3<3<3
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry!!! :hug:
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storychanter Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nope. It's a good thing. My English is broken anyway xD
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your english is broken?

Hey, if you want a good song, go listen to "Broke English" by Adam Lambert ♥♥♥
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storychanter Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
BEST SONG EVER!! I got his CD the DAY it came out and I listen to at least one of his songs every day. He is amazing and his music has inspired me so much <3
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Black-Rose-117 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
omg me too! I love Adam Lambert! I have his three major CD's and one downloaded from online! :D He's currently blasting threw my Ipod speakers ^^;

He is like... my God... 0-0
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storychanter Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have a recording of him from his teens (I think) and he's Fiyero and sings "Dancing Through Life" GUHH His voice is amazing x3
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